Redundant detail in describing body parts, and attributing action There seems to be a preoccupation among writers to describe the colour of eyes. Perhaps this is because eyes play such an essential role in communication for the sighted. In crafting a story, however, it’s crucial to ask oneself if this information is necessary to the advancement of the plot, or to the development of character. I think if you answer that constant query honestly, you’ll…

Common Errors in Fiction Manuscripts In varying degrees I’ve previously written how to prepare a manuscript for submission to Five Rivers. Given the experience both Robert and I have had over the past few years, an updated discussion of some items to watch when submitting fiction seems warranted. In the next few posts I will address the nine problems we encounter most frequently: The use of passive rather than active verbs Redundant detail in describing…